Kia Ora everybody, here is my Similes and Metaphors Writing! I had to write at least 1 simile and metaphor about the hot air balloon!
It was a beautiful sunset, I saw a hot air balloon floating above me like a feather. The water was a shining crystal. As I was watching the hot air balloon, I felt a soft breeze rushing on my back. Slowly, the hot air balloon floated past the fluffy clouds.
My sick sentence I fixed: It was a lovely sunset, the hot air balloon was floating like a feather. The water was a beautiful crystal.
HI Lila great writing kai pai please keep up the great work! how long did it take you? blog you later🙃
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