My Hot Air Balloon Writing!

 Kia Ora everybody, here is my Similes and Metaphors Writing! I had to write at least 1 simile and                                                            metaphor about the hot air balloon!

It was a beautiful sunset, I saw a hot air balloon floating above me like a feather. The water was a shining crystal. As I was watching the hot air balloon, I felt a soft breeze rushing on my back. Slowly, the hot air balloon floated past  the fluffy clouds.

My sick sentence I fixed: It was a lovely sunset, the hot air balloon was floating like a feather. The water was a beautiful crystal.