Friday 2 July 2021

My Hot Air Balloon Writing!

 Kia Ora everybody, here is my Similes and Metaphors Writing! I had to write at least 1 simile and                                                            metaphor about the hot air balloon!




It was a beautiful sunset, I saw a hot air balloon floating above me like a feather. The water was a shining crystal. As I was watching the hot air balloon, I felt a soft breeze rushing on my back. Slowly, the hot air balloon floated past  the fluffy clouds.


My sick sentence I fixed: It was a lovely sunset, the hot air balloon was floating like a feather. The water was a beautiful crystal.






1 comment:

  1. HI Lila great writing kai pai please keep up the great work! how long did it take you? blog you later🙃

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