Wednesday 23 June 2021

The Troll Writing


  
The troll slowly stomped down the street. He seemed very confused because of the people staring at him. The sailboat the troll was holding was the size of a house! His body and eyes were covered in grass, trees were also growing out of his back. It  looked like he was lost and he’s trying to find a way home. 


My sick sentence I fixed:
The troll stomped down the street like a gorilla. He had a gigantic nose and sharp, yellow teeth. Trees were growing out of his back

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