Friday, 18 June 2021

Abandoned House Writing


 

I slowly walked through the creepy forest. It was a dark and spooky night.. I kept on walking until I spotted a mysterious, abandoned house with bright, red lights glowing from the windows. I had goosebumps all over my body and my heart started pounding.. Bats were swooping past my head, I took a deep breath and walked through the fog..


My sick sentence I fixed: I slowly walked through the mysterious forest. It was so dark and foggy.. I spotted a spooky, abandoned house with red lights. I hear the trees rustling and I felt the cold breeze on my back. 


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