Friday, 6 August 2021

The Present (The Boy POV)

Kia Ora everybody, I had to do a writing based of a video called "The Present" I have written 3 points of view but I picked this one because it was my favourite.


First Person (The Boy): 


“I’m home!” mum yelled while shutting the front door. My eyes were glued to the tv, she placed a cardboard box on the table. “You should open it!” mum said, I put my controller down and opened the box. “Wow!” I said, it was a puppy! I was so happy, until I looked up and down and saw one of his legs was missing! I was so angry, I threw the puppy on the floor and continued to play my video games. On the corner of my eye, I saw the puppy  playing with a red ball. He ran to me and gave the ball, “No, get away!” I yelled at the puppy and kicked him. The puppy kept playing with his ball but got stuck in a box, he lifted the box and I started to giggle. I began to realize that even if there was something different about you, you can still have fun no matter what. So I grabbed my crutches and yelled “ Mum, we’ll be outside!”





 

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora, my name is Navala and I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka district School. I really like your blog post about the story about the dog and the boy. I remember when I did something like this before. My blog

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