Coin Operated (Third Person)

 Kia Ora everybody, Room 7 had to watch a video called "Coin Operated" and write about it.

 Here is my writing!

Third Person: 

On a sunny morning, a young boy named Michael was walking to the shops while playing with his toy rocket ship. When he reached the shops, he found a bigger rocket ship he could ride on! He begged his mum to ride on it, Michael pulled out a coin and put it in. He excitedly jumped on thinking he would fly to space. Suddenly, Michael was so disappointed. The rocket ship only moved around in one spot. He took off his space helmet and threw it on the ground. But Michael didn’t want to give up, he had an idea and decided to save up money and open a lemonade stand! Michael got older and was still selling lemonade, he saved up a lot of money. He closed his lemonade stand and went back to the rocket ship, he poured all of his coins in and put his space helmet back on. Michael jumped back on the rocket ship, it wouldn’t move. He felt really angry and punched the rocket ship, the coins dropped down and he started flying to space!